31 March 2011
THE ORNITHOLOGIST - A VINTAGE EULOGY
Blondie, who was hardly a blonde, gave birth to the boy horse, Fizz, who was
The Ornithologist
Blondie 29/9/87 - 11/3/11
“You won’t get much conversation outa this girl,”
Peter said, backing the old mare from her float.
“She’s not much of a talker.”
They’d been apart for twenty two years
this stately cutter and her man.
He’d sold her as a filly and sensibly ran off buccaneering,
only to discover he missed her, half a lifetime later,
after his wife left.
I told him we’d see,
and when he’d gone I walked to her in the gloaming,
talking as I do to humans.
After my hullo we swapped breath,
my tobacco Shiraz for her sweet malt
and quietly she showed me the birds,
tilting the head to that Raven,
nodding to the Hooded Plovers yonder,
lifting the great chin to the Yellow Tailed Black Cockatoos -
awarding them one mighty eye,
then the other,
then both.
Pigeon, Red Rump Parrot and Magpie she taught me that twilight,
following each lesson with a long questioning stare,
just to ensure I was there.
The hoot of the Boobook Owl closed our class,
when she turned content and wandered in silence to the trees.
“Blondie’s an ornithologist,”
I told Peter in the morning,
explaining the evening’s affair.
“That’s funny,” he said, after a disbelieving pause.
“As a foal she watched ants all day.”
Blondie broke down last night,
the grave sucking life from one exhausted leg,
leading Peter from the midnight to say
“You’re gonna lose your birdwatching mate in the morning.
I’ve just given her a good big feed.”
By the vibe outside I know the deed is done:
earth dug open somewhere I won’t go,
the great slump complete,
the last huge sigh of horse,
the red gape healed with shovel and tractor.
The vet has put his stuff away,
Blondie is back with her ants,
and the first grapes of vintage come through on an eager truck.
Philip White
11 Mar 11
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The Ornithologist
Blondie 29/9/87 - 11/3/11
“You won’t get much conversation outa this girl,”
Peter said, backing the old mare from her float.
“She’s not much of a talker.”
They’d been apart for twenty two years
this stately cutter and her man.
He’d sold her as a filly and sensibly ran off buccaneering,
only to discover he missed her, half a lifetime later,
after his wife left.
I told him we’d see,
and when he’d gone I walked to her in the gloaming,
talking as I do to humans.
After my hullo we swapped breath,
my tobacco Shiraz for her sweet malt
and quietly she showed me the birds,
tilting the head to that Raven,
nodding to the Hooded Plovers yonder,
lifting the great chin to the Yellow Tailed Black Cockatoos -
awarding them one mighty eye,
then the other,
then both.
Pigeon, Red Rump Parrot and Magpie she taught me that twilight,
following each lesson with a long questioning stare,
just to ensure I was there.
The hoot of the Boobook Owl closed our class,
when she turned content and wandered in silence to the trees.
“Blondie’s an ornithologist,”
I told Peter in the morning,
explaining the evening’s affair.
“That’s funny,” he said, after a disbelieving pause.
“As a foal she watched ants all day.”
Blondie broke down last night,
the grave sucking life from one exhausted leg,
leading Peter from the midnight to say
“You’re gonna lose your birdwatching mate in the morning.
I’ve just given her a good big feed.”
By the vibe outside I know the deed is done:
earth dug open somewhere I won’t go,
the great slump complete,
the last huge sigh of horse,
the red gape healed with shovel and tractor.
The vet has put his stuff away,
Blondie is back with her ants,
and the first grapes of vintage come through on an eager truck.
Philip White
11 Mar 11
.
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5 comments:
I've read this tribute twice, and am further moved the second time. Moved to tears. I'm all caught up in the basic trust and respect between creatures who don't need to eat each other to survive. And how transitory the human concept of love and friendship can be by comparison.
Whitey, that makes me cry every time. You should come and meet my old timer one day. He's 27 and showing few signs of slowing down. But he's not immortal (as far as I know!) I hope one day he lays down for a nice sleep in the sun and takes his last great gasp in peace.
Tghs looks like its a metaphot for all the grapes that came in on all the trucks
What a beautiful, tender tribute to Blondie. Philip that made my heart ache.
I like how you've incorporated dialogue into this poem, it gave it a real sense of atmosphere.
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